TOPIC: splashes of the creek
splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #22451
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with echoes of deliverance....
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #22462
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...in life there"s only one guarantee<br />you won't always have your feet on the ground<br />...coz we all fall down
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #22471
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no one fall in love by choice it is by chance, no one stays in love by chance it is by work and no one fall out of love by chance it is by choice...
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #22518
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with echoes of deliverance....
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #22527
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ohh finally the meancreek of the stream made his creek.....
     just keep hanging around dude....      your poem describes your deepness....      keep yourself seeing what you saw....      through perfect silence, i love that line....   |
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We are free up to the point of choice then the choice controls the chooser....
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #22602
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"just be true to urself is the best"
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #23156
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...in life there"s only one guarantee<br />you won't always have your feet on the ground<br />...coz we all fall down
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #23160
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ohh finally the meancreek of the stream made his creek..... just keep hanging around dude.... your poem describes your deepness.... keep yourself seeing what you saw.... through perfect silence, i love that line.... thanks for the appreciation... miss your messages... |
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with echoes of deliverance....
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #23162
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with echoes of deliverance....
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #23165
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...in life there"s only one guarantee<br />you won't always have your feet on the ground<br />...coz we all fall down
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #23228
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Nice piece. Can I critic it line by line too? On second thought that would just probably exhaust what little I have left of my damaged brain. haha
 Anyway, thanks for being part of the community, meancreek! O0 |
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Baguiophoria!
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #23292
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ohh finally the meancreek of the stream made his creek..... just keep hanging around dude.... your poem describes your deepness.... keep yourself seeing what you saw.... through perfect silence, i love that line.... thanks for the appreciation... miss your messages... .hey you are welcome  deepcreek..... ohhh good someone misses my messages....nice of you.. by the way, see if you can help in our project met ah.... O0 : |
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We are free up to the point of choice then the choice controls the chooser....
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #23371
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I could help...
two days ago, I was to meet the other guys at hunter's place but my mother trapped me.. so I wasnt able to. Tell me what to do... |
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with echoes of deliverance....
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #23373
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...creek padaan... ;D ang mga dadaan dito may kiss... :-* ...kiss from you o from us na dumadaan... both |
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with echoes of deliverance....
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #23448
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[b]"No one should be dominated by his own past, but it is his priviledge to build a better future upon such foundations as are available...." [/b]
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #23501
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"just be true to urself is the best"
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #23614
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nice poem.
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #23738
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with echoes of deliverance....
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #23739
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with echoes of deliverance....
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Re: splashes of the creek 5 years, 8 months ago #23740
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nice poem. thanks.... day by day, i wish love and care for you.... :-* :-* :-* |
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with echoes of deliverance....
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