guys,try niyo to basahin...i think this is a very sad and touching story....


hay naku.. kainis isipen ang mga ganitong kwento...pro cge...basahen nyo n
ren!!! Ü


Below is the winning piece in the latest contest sa UP Creative writing
contest.

its been 4 months since i saw him and talagang namimiss ko na siya... pero
what can i do? it seems that i have loved the wrong person.... but still
the pain keeps on hurting me and kung  walang magbibigay ng gamot para dito
sa nararamdaman ko.... baka mamatay na ako....

to give you a background about my life, everything  seems to be fine except
dun ! sa time na dumating na sa buhay ko yung hinayupak na lalake na yon....
hehehehe.... kung curious kayo about dun sa guy... bestfriend ko po yon
kaso lang iba na  ang nangyari as time passes by.....

classmate ko sya nung high school. pards pa nga  ang tawagan namen.... o db
ang sweet? di na ako  iba sa kanya and ganon na ren sya sa aken....  kung
di nga lang ako naging babae baka naiuwi na  ako nun sa bahay nila and baka
lahat ng gawaing  pang brusko eh ipagawa na nun sa ken eh..... pero
cyempre mukha pa ren naman akong babae noh!!

high school cyempre may prom.... wala cyang date,  wla ren ako.... i know
that he wanted to invite  me to be his date pero ang ogag nga kasi nun kaya
the last minute tsaka lang sya nag-ask. he went  to our house... nakamotor
po sya and medyo  pawisan pero infairness.... mabango pa ren....

he ask my permission to see my dress for the  prom.... cyempre para maloka
sya sa aken at may  konting surprise... i refuse.... o sige, medyo na
frustrate sya pero hindi yon naging hadlang para  invite nya ko.... sa
ganda ko na to..... cyempre ang dami munang pa-echeng.... hanggang sa
tanungin nya ako kung may date na ba me.... e  kung di ba naman siya
abnormal eh.... papayag ba  akong makipagdate sa iba eh sya lang ang gusto
ko.... lam mo yon... sarap sampalin.... so in  short, papilit pa ba ako?
syempre.....

the night of my life came, i was so pretty sabi  ng nang-uuto kong nanay...
pero naniwala lang ako  nang sya na ang nagsabi.... blush ako ever....
kahit alam kong maganda ako since birth (hehehehe)  iba pa ren yung sa
kanya galing diba?

we enjoyed that night and lalo ko lang  napatunayan sa sarili ko na mahal
ko na pala ang hinayupak na bestfrend ko......

syempre ano pa ba ang sunod na event sa prom  kundi ang graduation na db?
the night before the  graduation, we talked on the phone na para bang  it
would be the last time na maririnig namen ang boses ng isat-isa..... i've
waited for the moment  na mabanggit nya na may feelings din sya and hindi
naman ako nagkamali.... tinanong nya ako  kung may possibility daw na
maging kame.... i know na maiinis kayo sa ken dahil alam nyo ba ang  sagot
ko? ah, eh.... hindi pwede kase bestfriends  tayo eh.... yung mga anak na
lang naten yung ipag-partner naten.... sa isip-isip ko.... ang tanga! pano
ko nasabi ang ganong words? pero wala na akong magagawa..... alam namang
bawiin ko pa eh  di nahuli naman ako db? pe ro ang tanga ko  talga....

cyempre college na.... im so proud to say na  napunta naman ako sa
magandang school and take  note... pare ho kame ng school..... ano to?
kailangan bang ituloy ang naudlot na pagmamahalan  namen?.... hehehe....

nagkaboyfriend ako for a year and a half....  minahal ko sya pero there are
these conflicts and problems na di na kayang ayusin.... in short....
nagbreak kame.....

i guess god meant that to happen kasi yon din  yung time na nagkita kame ng
bestfrend ko..... sa  sobrang miss namen ang isa't-isa.... sabay na  kameng
umuwi, kumain, pumasok..... im happy pero  parang lalo ko lang pinahirapan
ang sarili ko  dahil my feelings for that guy grows each and every time
that we are together... buti na lang  magaling akong magtago at
magpigil.... hehehe.... bilib kayo noh?.....

one morning, im so busy preparing my project that  would be pass on that
same day.... alam kong  dumati ng na sya at nasa likuran ko na ang mokong
pero dahil sobrang pressure sa project.... gusto  ko man syang dambahan...
cyempre mamayang gabi na  lang di ba? hehehe.... di ko sya masyadong
napansin.....

may inabot syang sulat sa aken and he asked if i  could join him sa
lunch.... i said yes.... then,  alis na cya.... alam naman kc nyang i'm
busy.....

when i was about to enter the room, somebody  bumped me and my precious
project fell... gusto  ko mang magalet... what can i do db? instead i  ask
my prof to give me another chance to do my  project.... naalala ko si
mokong.... the lunch  date.... kinuha ko ang cell ko to text him that i
cant come to our meeting.... e kaso.... pag  tinamaan k nga naman ng
malas.... check operator  service daw.... i tried to look for friends or
other kakilala pero malas that day talaga....

and so i took my lunch all by my self.... naalala  ko yung letter....
hinanap ko sa bag... WALA !!!!  bumalik me sa corridor praying na andon pa
yung sulat.... wala ren.... god! why? minsan lang  magbigay ng sulat
yon...! . nawala pa.... dont know  how to tell him about the letter....

and so days and weeks passed, pag nagkikita  kame... di nya ako
pinapansin... ako, i tried to  talk to him pero alam kong may kasalanan ako
pero  ganon ba kalaki ang nagawa kong di pagpunta at  ganon na lang ang
iwas nya?... sige... hinayaan  ko na lang....

months na ang binilang... i heard that he was  dating a girl from the same
school that we are  in... masakit.... na sa iba ko pa narinig na sila
na.... mas masakit na wala na akong halaga sa  kanya.....

basta... ilang araw din yon na ganon ang nararamdaman ko.... weeks....
months....  gagraduate na po ako.... i wonder what's in store  for me in my
last day in school.... and so i  thought na puntahan yung favorite hang out
namen.... when i was about to get near the  place.... i saw him... with the
girl.... umiiyak  ang bruha but i cant hear what they a! re talking
about.... so i've decided to get out of that place  before my tears burst
out.... and then a common  friend ang sumalubong sa aken.... saying na
buntis  ang girl.... syempre.... durog na durog ang puso  ko.... kung kaya
nyo lang ma-imagine yung  naramdaman ko.....

the night of that same day.... naloka ang lola  nyo.... nagparamdam ang
mokong pagkaraan ng  pagkatagal-tagal na panahon... i thought it was
something good for me... for us.... pero i was  wrong.... so wrong..... he
gave me a wedding  invitation and isa ako sa bridesmaids..... the  girl...
she was waiting in the car.... o db? dati motor lang ngaun... car na....

and so the wedding came.... maganda po ako  nun.... sabi ng nanay ko pero
wala ng nagsecond  the motion eh.... so naniwala na lang ako sa  nanay
ko.... then, there was this professor who  came to see me.... he handed
over a letter with  my name carefully printed on the enveloped.... he  said
that he looked for the owner of that letter  kaso lang po malaki po ang
school namin kaya  mahirap magkahanapan db? and so nung nakita nya ang name
ko sa invitation, he decided to bring  the letter thinking that it could
save souls...  daw....

and so i was about to open the letter when the priest ask kung sino daw ang
tututol... dedma  ako.... alam namang manggulo pa ko noh....

binasa ko na ang letter..... nakakatouch po  talaga.... he opened up his
feelings for me.... hoping na meron din daw akong feelings for  him.... he
ask that if i will show up to our hang - out the next day after he gave his
letter, then  it means that i also have feelings for him and  that he would
love me for the rest of our
lives.... but if i wont.... then he will never  open that topic again....
h! e pleaded to me na  sana pumunta ako... ...

if only i have that letter.... if only i knew  about it.... kung di lang
ako clumsy and careless  to keep that letter... things would be
different.... if only.....

and so i heard the priest announced the couple as  husband and wife.... ang
sakit......

picture taking..... gusto mang sumabog ng  nararamdaman ko.... as you
know.... magaling  akong magpigil.... pero masakit po talaga....
sobra......

after the picture taking...... niyakap ako ng  bestfrend ko.... ang
higpit.... and teary eyed  nyang cnabi na....

i still love you.......

-the above story is a perfect example of a situational irony...

--- it's  sad indeed..   

and perhaps this song could probably  be taken in conjunction with the story...

"Ironic"

An old man turned ninety-eight
He won the lottery and died the next day
It's a black fly in your Chardonnay
It's a death row pardon two minutes too late
And isn't it ironic... don't you think

It's like rain on your wedding day
It's a free ride when you've already paid
It's the good advice that you just didn't take
Who would've thought... it figures

Mr. Play It Safe was afraid to fly
He packed his suitcase and kissed his kids goodbye
He waited his whole damn life to take that flight
And as the plane crashed down he thought
"Well isn't this nice..."
And isn't it ironic... don't you think

It's like rain on your wedding day
It's a free ride when you've already paid
It's the good advice that you just didn't take
Who would've thought... it figures

Well life has a funny way of sneaking up on you
When you think everything's okay and everything's going right
And life has a funny way of helping you out when
You think everything's gone wrong and everything blows up
In your face

A traffic jam when you're already late
A no-smoking sign on your cigarette break
It's like ten thousand spoons when all you need is a knife
It's meeting the man of my dreams
And then meeting his beautiful wife
And isn't it ironic...don't you think
A little too ironic...and, yeah, I really do think...

It's like rain on your wedding day
It's a free ride when you've already paid
It's the good advice that you just didn't take
Who would've thought... it figures

Life has a funny way of sneaking up on you
Life has a funny, funny way of helping you out
Helping you out

Perfect timing naman pagdating ng letter, parang fantasy. hehe

Yan ang sinasabing 'Dahil ang buhay parang sine'.  Very sad indeed but isn't there annulment somewhere? 

nangyayari pala ito sa tunay na buhay. tsk tsk tsk. torpe >

many issues here but it's really sad but hey life is what you make it..

Sad story for two people who think they're in love.

To the religious, they will say... "It's God's will; He has a better plan for you that's why things messed up to hinder you from doing what you think was best at that time..."

To the realists, they will say...."Torpe......Stupid in English. Why didn't you tell him at the earliest possible time? That should have spared you lots of time thinking if he loves you or loves you not...

I've read this sad story posted here somewhere... about some guys who got in touch with their feminine side.

Makes me think of making a sad story with you guys on it.

Come on... this story is not sad? It's a happy ending! The guy ended up loving two women. What daya know? It's possible! Spread the love and the cheers! Of course the ending is a wedding and i therefore conclude na may inuman. Whare's the sad in that?

Cheers! Everything happens for a reason... And to drink... you can always find a reason!

I guess for a story to be sad it would have to be semi-dark. Something like 0verlord on drugs:

0verlord is the main character. One of his friends introduces him to another friend. Drugs. And so he graduates from drinking beer to sipping expectorants.

Slowly it begins to corrupt him, twisting his mind. When Ball Bag sees him highballing cough syrup, being the concerned friend he is, he tries to get 0verlord to quit.

However 0verlord sees this differently. Like Ball Bag was trying to hurt him. This results in Ball Bag getting injured and sent to the hospital.

After a bunch of twists and turns, all the main characters except 0verlord and herbie the police officer are either dead or really injured. While all this is going on Ball Bag is in a coma.

Wanting desperately to get away, he wakes up the next morning in BECI.

Surrounded by a bunch of Koreans and herbie hot on his trail, what's a druggie to do?

Just a thought.