Please post your original compositions here. Poems, essays, etc. Here's one I borrowed from Jam. Hope Jam wouldn't mind.

Hidden Mystery

In the deepest depths of you and me
In the deepest depths of we
Lies the most beautiful jewel
Shining forth eternally

Within that precious jewel
Within that priceless piece of we
Lies a time that is beyond all time
Lies a place that is beyond all space

Within that divine source of radiance
Lies a love beyond all love
Waiting
          Waiting
                    Waiting
Ever so patiently

Waiting for you, waiting for me
Waiting patiently for all to see
The beauty that is you inside of me
The beauty that is me inside of thee

In the deepest depths of you and me
In the deepest depths of we
Lies the love and wisdom
Of all Eternity

enya maipost ditoy  shadow?

Your original compositions please.

I think it's better to give your compositions their own topic spot, they deserve it. But anyway... you can do it here as the great hunter said.  O0

ok uwin met ah.....nice ....

[center]SOMEDAY...YOU!

there are many dreams that fail
promises that fade away
that he'll never leave me
and will love me eternally.

so what i do is believe in him
coz i thought his love for me will be forever
but i was wrong
i felt my heartbeat srong.

now that we had parted ways
his love for me has gone away
hoping that someday
i'll find someone who is sincere and kind to me.

so what i can do now is find somebody new
who is sincere, honest and true
hope i can find a person who will love me
and hoping that someday it is....YOU!
  :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten: :smitten:[/center]

>>>this is my first composition when i was still in high school. i fell inlove but he left me...he hurt me...i was so down and i was grieving to death! then, after some time, i met someone! he helped me move on and find love again... :smitten: <<<

daytoy met kakorni ak....

I guess we're to young
  to grasp the half complexity of life....
we have a long way to go....
alot more heart aches and defeats
    and victories to face.
which will help us to grow
  so we may understand....
a lot more lesson.....
i just hope that i learned
    all the lesson worth knowing
            with you by my side
because you see,
    i love you.....


nababyagen nga poems....kakokorni an.....

humiritak man pay.....hehehehe

both of you have hurt me
more ths anyone else could do
but it's not really your fault
it's mine,
for expecting too much
i wanted more than you could give
    and i got hurt.
well, 
at least i learned somehign from it.
i learned,
i can never trust anyone that much again
it just makes me too easy a target
there's no sense of talking anymore
it's over and i'm already tired

ay... wrong... i posted my poem sa eZine... pwede import dito?

sure...post lang ng post! ahe 

In eZine, what's the criteria for approving an article?